I absolutely loved the demo! Can't wait for the extended demo, Kickstarter, and eventually full version! The humor and references are absolutely hilarious and I'm happy to know that I understood (almost) all references immediately (oh my god they were roommates + the brand names had to be my favorites). There's also a fair amount of mystery and intrigue (like the story behind Kat's drunk babysitter and the naked florist.../hj). I want to know what the deal is with Mr. Gallagher and it's fun creating theories about him! I also love the mc, all the LIs, and Kat so far! It's so difficult to choose a favorite between them, but right now I'm leaning towards Felix because I love a good enemy to lovers story (and bullying him is fun). But Enoch is absolutely precious, even though I internally die inside whenever a joke flies over his head. Lucas has my heart as well, I just want to put him in my pocket tbh! Lastly, the art is phenomenal! I love the backgrounds, sprites, cgs, etc. It's just so pretty and sets the mood so well. This game will definitely be worth whatever price you set it at, I'll be patiently waiting until then. Thank you for this wonderful game <3
Haha thank you for the nice review! I loved hearing your thoughts on the game
I too love a good enemies to lovers story >:) and you jest, but for all you know, Kat's babysitter/florist story could be integral to the main storyline :O
I'm glad there were so many things you liked and that you're excited for the full thing! :D
I LOVE THIS GAME!!! I really enjoyed this and I'm waiting for the next version. I'm not gonna write much about the game because I'm not used to english, but I really loved it and omg the scene of Enoch about to kiss the protagonist <333
It's cute as hell! Usually i'm not too interested in these but I saw a video on youtube and the commentator's voice for our lovely alien friend was a bit too much for me to follow >_> So i got the demo instead. Glad I did- It's a lot of fun. It's a bit hard for me to put myself in the MC's shoes just because they're much different from myself but that's okay! The art is *lovely* and the characters are charismatic. And I'm curious to learn more about Lucas and I also wanna know what the hell Felix's problem is too haha. Good game, great art, great interaction, fun choices, cute moments. :)
literally started playing this as soon as i downloaded it. long story short, i was up all night playing because of a certain alien guy (enoch is so precious i just want to smooch him). the art is beautiful and the story is so well-written too. the choices in the game made me feel like i'm actually branching out to different storylines. thank you so much to the dev for blessing us such an awesome game! looking forward to the full release :)
I'm planning a Kickstarter launch sometime near September! If you wanna support me making the full game, I hope you'll support the Kickstarter then either by pledging or sharing it!
Very intriguing, long demo. I'm looking forward to playing the full game and deciding whose heart to break first... :,) Some of those choices are actually kinda challenging. You really want me to think while playing? Rude. I like it.
NAURRRRRRRRRRRRRR DO YOU KNOW THAT WHEN I SAW THAT THE GAME IS A DEMO AT THE END MY HEART BROKE AND I SHED A TEAR 😭😭😭 I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS A DEMO 😭 but enough of my drama, THIS GAME IS FRICKING THE GAME OF THE YEAR FOR ME IT WAS PERFECT IT WAS MARVELOUS IT WAS *CHEF'S KISS* OH MY GAWD PEOPLE NEED TO MAKE MORE GAMES LIKE THIS OH MY DEAR LORD PLEASE TELL ME WHEN WILL YOU BE ABLE TO RELEASE THE FULL GAME EVEN IF THERES NO EXACT DATE AS LONG THERES A DATE WHERE I'LL BE WAITING PLEASE TELL im in love with all the love interests there THANK YOU CREATOR FOR CREATING THIS GAME 🤩🙇♀️🙇♀️
Haha wow, that's very high praise! Thank you!! :D I'm glad you loved it so much!
I'm planning a Kickstarter launch + Extended Demo sometime later this year. Not a concrete date yet but expect some news around September. I'm releasing a dev log later this month on this topic as well. I hope you'll support the game then! :)
This game is adorable! It could be an anime. Seriously, the art is amazing, I found myself particularly admiring the backgrounds—I want to step through the screen into Cozy Crepes so so badly. Enoch is a national treasure and always steals the show. Though I won’t deny when I saw Felix I was immediately like OH NO that’s my type, mega Togami vibes. I like the snooty ones, I like teasing them and making them fall for me. I want to know more about him. Sue me. I teased him to beat me at the quiz and saw his affinity go up and was like oh nooo, Enoch has competition. Love that he’s a mess at sports too. Why am I a glutton for assholes?? …That sounded wrong.
ERR MOVING ON. Kat is also awesome, love her design and personality, and I loved the “one bad Monopoly game away from being bitter enemies” line. Speaking of which, the humor is great too! So many good moments. Enoch trying to hand his crepe over to Lucas. ;v; Trying to educate him about the girl hitting on him. TToTT and HIS SWEAT DOODLE. I’m gonna cry. I love him. Every single scene I was like MUST PROTECC BEST BOI.
Well done to the team! Your hard work is clear and I’m looking forward to the full version! BEST OF LUCK, both with the Kickstarter and with creating the game!!
I was absolutely hooked! Can't wait for more! Really love the humor and the cast of characters present in the game as well ^^ I did catch the wrong pronoun being used when Enoch refers to a female MC here
This is such a charming and funny demo - super looking forward to the extended one and the full game!!! Love these characters already and can't wait to see more of them :0
That´s a very nice demo. I want more see from Felix. I think he had a good point for his behaviour. A variety of the music over the game can a good idea be. The BG and Sprites a well done. Thanks for your hard work.
I instantly fell in love with this when I first found it on Twitter, and although I don't usually play otome demos, I couldn't resist playing this one. I enjoyed every second of it! The dialogue and references are hilarious, and all of the characters are super fun to watch. It's been super difficult to choose between Enoch, Lucas, and Felix, but I think the rivals-to-lovers dynamic + banter is the most intriguing (and fun to watch) for me so far, haha.
And a side note: during the dodgeball game, I noticed that after a female MC chooses to defend Lucas, Felix asks if you "ladies" are done talking, as if the MC is talking with Kat instead. Not sure if that's intentional or not, like Felix just being extra condescending to Lucas, lol.
Anyways, thank you for the wonderful demo, and I look forward to following the development of your game!
AAAAA I love this demo so muchh (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ Thanks for making this!!! I love the humor! Thanks for making me laugh hehe > < I fell in love with every character even when Felix is a lil mean (ToT)/~~~ I can't wait for the full game eeeeeee!
Yoo so glad to give this demo a go, it was hilarious and I laughed in literally every interaction in this game! Writing is amazing, all the characters are loveable, banters are gold, and the comedy is totally out of the world (yes, pun intended)! Can't wait for the full release and good luck for development! Will be cheering for you!
gfdghj aaa i loved this so much!! i haven't finished the demo yet, but omg i've been laughing so much because of the random shenanigans. also id sell my soul for felix and lucas omg they're amazing i love them already. i'll try to save up money to buy the full game when it releases!! good luck developing this game, and i hope you have a swell day :D!
Hi! Do you plan on releasing it on Steam when it's finished? The game is so so good, I'd love to buy it whatever the price, but unfortunately only Steam is available in my country rn lmao. So i was wondering if it's even going to be possible haha 🥲
when i first chose the game i didn't really expect anything but after finishing the demo, i am COMPLETELY invested and in love with the story (and lucas). please please PLEASE keep up the good work and good luck for the extended demo!!!
This is so good! I'm instantly hooked, the funny moments are great and Enoch is so adorable, very Golden Retriever energy which I love. I enjoy all the other characters too, especially Mrs. Potts and her granddaughter! I look forward to the extended demo.
I'm excited for the next update. It took me seconds to realize something and got excited. I wanna know what happens next especially with Felix. They are all so cute !! :")))
Aw, Felix is adorable. To be honest I just kept skipping to the parts where he was in it. I really like characters like him and I love rivals to lovers stories. So I'm excited to see how his and Riley's relationship develops!
I did try to read everything in the beginning but the pacing felt pretty slow to me. I think it does have a lot of potential and I'll keep an eye out for the full release. Good job! :D
I loved every bit of it so far! All the characters (yes, even Felix) are lovable, the art is super pretty, and lots of moments had me laughing and just enjoying myself overall-
I let out a genuine gasp of devastation and horror when it ended- I can't wait for more content! Such a good game so far <3
It's everything I was expecting and so much more! The art is beautiful, the writing is funny, and I'm loving all the characters (please stop making me choose between them, I just can't (>_<) hahaha)
Great job all around, looking forward to the extended demo!
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I absolutely loved the demo! Can't wait for the extended demo, Kickstarter, and eventually full version! The humor and references are absolutely hilarious and I'm happy to know that I understood (almost) all references immediately (oh my god they were roommates + the brand names had to be my favorites). There's also a fair amount of mystery and intrigue (like the story behind Kat's drunk babysitter and the naked florist.../hj). I want to know what the deal is with Mr. Gallagher and it's fun creating theories about him!
I also love the mc, all the LIs, and Kat so far! It's so difficult to choose a favorite between them, but right now I'm leaning towards Felix because I love a good enemy to lovers story (and bullying him is fun). But Enoch is absolutely precious, even though I internally die inside whenever a joke flies over his head. Lucas has my heart as well, I just want to put him in my pocket tbh!
Lastly, the art is phenomenal! I love the backgrounds, sprites, cgs, etc. It's just so pretty and sets the mood so well. This game will definitely be worth whatever price you set it at, I'll be patiently waiting until then. Thank you for this wonderful game <3
Haha thank you for the nice review! I loved hearing your thoughts on the game
I too love a good enemies to lovers story >:) and you jest, but for all you know, Kat's babysitter/florist story could be integral to the main storyline :O
I'm glad there were so many things you liked and that you're excited for the full thing! :D
I LOVE THIS GAME!!! I really enjoyed this and I'm waiting for the next version. I'm not gonna write much about the game because I'm not used to english, but I really loved it and omg the scene of Enoch about to kiss the protagonist <333
Thank you!! :D That scene was super funny to write hehe :3
It's cute as hell!
Usually i'm not too interested in these but I saw a video on youtube and the commentator's voice for our lovely alien friend was a bit too much for me to follow >_> So i got the demo instead. Glad I did- It's a lot of fun. It's a bit hard for me to put myself in the MC's shoes just because they're much different from myself but that's okay! The art is *lovely* and the characters are charismatic. And I'm curious to learn more about Lucas and I also wanna know what the hell Felix's problem is too haha.
Good game, great art, great interaction, fun choices, cute moments. :)
What is Felix's problem indeed? ;)
Thanks for trying out the demo in the end, I'm happy you liked it!
literally started playing this as soon as i downloaded it. long story short, i was up all night playing because of a certain
alienguy (enoch is so precious i just want to smooch him). the art is beautiful and the story is so well-written too. the choices in the game made me feel like i'm actually branching out to different storylines. thank you so much to the dev for blessing us such an awesome game! looking forward to the full release :)thank YOU for playing and leaving such a nice review :D I'm happy you're excited for the full thing!
Enoch: K-Kill?! Don't kill for me!! D:
Is this gonna be free?
The demo and Extended Demo will both be free but the full game will cost money! I'm planning to release it on both itch.io and Steam.
Im happy that it will also be on steam! Waiting for it to be released.
I would love to play the full game. Do you have an idea, when its gona be done?
I'm planning a Kickstarter launch sometime near September! If you wanna support me making the full game, I hope you'll support the Kickstarter then either by pledging or sharing it!
Nice! I cant wait ^^
Very intriguing, long demo. I'm looking forward to playing the full game and deciding whose heart to break first... :,) Some of those choices are actually kinda challenging. You really want me to think while playing? Rude. I like it.
It's not a visual novel without some tough choices >:) I'm happy you had fun playing! Thank you so much for featuring my game on your channel :D
NAURRRRRRRRRRRRRR DO YOU KNOW THAT WHEN I SAW THAT THE GAME IS A DEMO AT THE END MY HEART BROKE AND I SHED A TEAR 😭😭😭 I DIDN'T KNOW IT WAS A DEMO 😭 but enough of my drama, THIS GAME IS FRICKING THE GAME OF THE YEAR FOR ME IT WAS PERFECT IT WAS MARVELOUS IT WAS *CHEF'S KISS* OH MY GAWD PEOPLE NEED TO MAKE MORE GAMES LIKE THIS OH MY DEAR LORD PLEASE TELL ME WHEN WILL YOU BE ABLE TO RELEASE THE FULL GAME EVEN IF THERES NO EXACT DATE AS LONG THERES A DATE WHERE I'LL BE WAITING PLEASE TELL im in love with all the love interests there THANK YOU CREATOR FOR CREATING THIS GAME 🤩🙇♀️🙇♀️
Haha wow, that's very high praise! Thank you!! :D I'm glad you loved it so much!
I'm planning a Kickstarter launch + Extended Demo sometime later this year. Not a concrete date yet but expect some news around September. I'm releasing a dev log later this month on this topic as well. I hope you'll support the game then! :)
This game is adorable! It could be an anime. Seriously, the art is amazing, I found myself particularly admiring the backgrounds—I want to step through the screen into Cozy Crepes so so badly. Enoch is a national treasure and always steals the show. Though I won’t deny when I saw Felix I was immediately like OH NO that’s my type, mega Togami vibes. I like the snooty ones, I like teasing them and making them fall for me. I want to know more about him. Sue me. I teased him to beat me at the quiz and saw his affinity go up and was like oh nooo, Enoch has competition. Love that he’s a mess at sports too. Why am I a glutton for assholes?? …That sounded wrong.
ERR MOVING ON. Kat is also awesome, love her design and personality, and I loved the “one bad Monopoly game away from being bitter enemies” line. Speaking of which, the humor is great too! So many good moments. Enoch trying to hand his crepe over to Lucas. ;v; Trying to educate him about the girl hitting on him. TToTT and HIS SWEAT DOODLE. I’m gonna cry. I love him. Every single scene I was like MUST PROTECC BEST BOI.
Well done to the team! Your hard work is clear and I’m looking forward to the full version! BEST OF LUCK, both with the Kickstarter and with creating the game!!
-Taylor
AHH Thank you so much!! :D
hehe I totally share your love for snooty tsunderes, that's why I simp for Clark so much :3
I'm happy you enjoyed the demo! Thank you for all the kind words! <3
I was absolutely hooked! Can't wait for more! Really love the humor and the cast of characters present in the game as well ^^ I did catch the wrong pronoun being used when Enoch refers to a female MC here
Thank you! I'm glad you loved it! :D
And thank you for pointing out another bug! I'll fix it in the next update :)
This is such a charming and funny demo - super looking forward to the extended one and the full game!!! Love these characters already and can't wait to see more of them :0
Thank you!! I'm glad you're looking forward to more! :D
Haha nope, you just found another bug. Thanks for letting me know! I'll fix it in the next update! :)
I'm absolutely in love with this demo. <3
I really enjoyed the story and especially the humor. It's really unusual for me, but I laughed so much.)
I definitely will wait for a full version!
Enoch and Lucas are soo sweet, btw. Love them♡
I'm glad it made you laugh! :D
I love my precious boys too <3
I loved it. It's perfect. Instant buy on sight. Seriously, I will stab my wallet for this.
Can't wait to romance the hell out of Felix :3
Very high praise! Thank you!! :D
I'm glad you're hyped for more Felix <3
This is an awesome demo :) Cool concept and great likeable characters, I was really invested in the story
Looking forward to the full version!
P.S. substitute teacher is sus, totes an evil alien >:P
Thank you! I'm glad you think so! :D
Mr. Gallagher kind of a sussy baka... *calls EMERGENCY MEETING*
That´s a very nice demo. I want more see from Felix. I think he had a good point for his behaviour. A variety of the music over the game can a good idea be. The BG and Sprites a well done. Thanks for your hard work.
Thank you! :3
My heart broken into tiny pieces when I reached the end of the demo, I know where my money will go after the full game is released..
Aww... but thank you! :D
I instantly fell in love with this when I first found it on Twitter, and although I don't usually play otome demos, I couldn't resist playing this one. I enjoyed every second of it! The dialogue and references are hilarious, and all of the characters are super fun to watch. It's been super difficult to choose between Enoch, Lucas, and Felix, but I think the rivals-to-lovers dynamic + banter is the most intriguing (and fun to watch) for me so far, haha.
And a side note: during the dodgeball game, I noticed that after a female MC chooses to defend Lucas, Felix asks if you "ladies" are done talking, as if the MC is talking with Kat instead. Not sure if that's intentional or not, like Felix just being extra condescending to Lucas, lol.
Anyways, thank you for the wonderful demo, and I look forward to following the development of your game!
I'm glad you made an exception for my demo and that you loved it! :D
And yup, Felix calls you and your teammates 'ladies' even if you're a male MC and Lucas. Because he's a condescending gremlin like that :P
Thank you for the kind words! :)
You'll definitely get your chance to smooch him in the main game ;)
i cannot wait :DDD
This is my favorite demo ever, I'm murdering my wallet whenever the whole game comes out ToT
Very high praise! :O
Thank you so much! :D
AAAAA I love this demo so muchh (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ Thanks for making this!!! I love the humor! Thanks for making me laugh hehe > < I fell in love with every character even when Felix is a lil mean (ToT)/~~~ I can't wait for the full game eeeeeee!
Aww you're welcome and I'm glad you love it so much! :D
Felix is a lil meanie, isn't he? :P
Yoo so glad to give this demo a go, it was hilarious and I laughed in literally every interaction in this game! Writing is amazing, all the characters are loveable, banters are gold, and the comedy is totally out of the world (yes, pun intended)! Can't wait for the full release and good luck for development! Will be cheering for you!
A fellow pun maker, I see ;)
Ahhh thank you so much for all the kind words!! :D
gfdghj aaa i loved this so much!! i haven't finished the demo yet, but omg i've been laughing so much because of the random shenanigans. also id sell my soul for felix and lucas omg they're amazing i love them already. i'll try to save up money to buy the full game when it releases!! good luck developing this game, and i hope you have a swell day :D!
Aww, thanks so much! I'm happy it's been making you laugh and that you love Lucas and Felix :3
Hope you have a swell day too! :D
I had so much fun with this demo, it's so cute and funny!! I loved all 3 love interests (even Felix with his arrogance 😂 )!!
My favorite so far has to be Enoch. He's such a cinnamon roll, must protecc 😭 💘
Looking forward to buying the full version!! 😊
Aw, I'm glad you had fun with it :D and that you love the LIs! (even Felix xD)
Must protecc Enoch!!
Hi! Do you plan on releasing it on Steam when it's finished? The game is so so good, I'd love to buy it whatever the price, but unfortunately only Steam is available in my country rn lmao. So i was wondering if it's even going to be possible haha 🥲
I do plan on releasing the full game on Steam! :)
It'll depend on if the Kickstarter is successful in funding the rest of the game
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93/100 VERY GOOD
Oh wow, thank you for featuring my game on your channel and for the great rating! :)
Yup, it will! I don't have a price set in stone yet though aha
The Demo and Extended Demo will both be free though, in preparation for the Kickstarter later this year
Thanks! And who wouldn't simp for Enoch? ;)
OML Now I am attached, I really liked this more than I thought I would, its so nicely done! Am definitely looking forward to the completed version!!!!
Thank you!! :3
when i first chose the game i didn't really expect anything but after finishing the demo, i am COMPLETELY invested and in love with the story (and lucas). please please PLEASE keep up the good work and good luck for the extended demo!!!
Thank you so much! <3 I'm glad you really liked it :D
romance an alien boy? im sold, i need to play now
Alien boys <3
Kicking myself for not trying this sooner! I wish you ALL the success on making this game and I can't wait for the extended demo and completed game 🥰
Thank you so much! ^.^
I wish you the same for your game!
This is so good! I'm instantly hooked, the funny moments are great and Enoch is so adorable, very Golden Retriever energy which I love. I enjoy all the other characters too, especially Mrs. Potts and her granddaughter! I look forward to the extended demo.
That's the most apt description of Enoch if I've ever heard one hahaha
I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D
ok mate. this is amazing. really looking forward to more of this. and would love to figure out how to beat metalmouth in dodge balls
Thanks!
There's definitely a way to beat him if you weren't able to haha ;p
oh damn. must find that route. first play is all about Enoch, and not losing to Felix, lol
yay! we beat Felix. muahahahahaha.
Nice job! :D
I'm excited for the next update. It took me seconds to realize something and got excited. I wanna know what happens next especially with Felix. They are all so cute !! :")))
I wonder what you realized... :o
I'm glad you're excited to know more and that you like the characters! I'm especially glad that Felix is getting love haha
This was a cute demo. Regarding the kickstarter plans...are you developing any plans for a patreon/Ko-Fi page?
The writing for this first chapter was hilarious btw...but I also agree the pace felt a little bit slow as the chapter progressed.
I'm glad you thought it was funny! xD
I have thought about potentially making a Ko-Fi in the future. I'll update with a dev log and on social media if I do!
Aw, Felix is adorable. To be honest I just kept skipping to the parts where he was in it. I really like characters like him and I love rivals to lovers stories. So I'm excited to see how his and Riley's relationship develops!
I did try to read everything in the beginning but the pacing felt pretty slow to me. I think it does have a lot of potential and I'll keep an eye out for the full release. Good job! :D
Thank you! I'm happy Felix is liked :D I was worried he'd be too much of a jerk hahaha
I love characters like him too! Writing his scenes was a ton of fun
I'm going to work on the pacing during the Extended Demo for sure!
I loved every bit of it so far! All the characters (yes, even Felix) are lovable, the art is super pretty, and lots of moments had me laughing and just enjoying myself overall-
I let out a genuine gasp of devastation and horror when it ended- I can't wait for more content! Such a good game so far <3
Thank you!! :D
I'm really happy that you enjoyed it so much! (even Felix :') haha)
Loved every second of it (✧ω✧)!
It's everything I was expecting and so much more! The art is beautiful, the writing is funny, and I'm loving all the characters (please stop making me choose between them, I just can't (>_<) hahaha)
Great job all around, looking forward to the extended demo!
Ahhhh thank you so much!! :D
I'm really glad it lived up to your expectations! :')
Totally worth the hours I spent playing! And I was genuinely sad when it ended, oh my god x'D
Will definitely be waiting for the extended demo! <3
Congrats on the Demo release and great job, Wraith! ^v^)/
Ahhhh thank you again!! <3
I can't believe you finished it already! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D
Sure thing! Am speedy when it comes to games I'm hyped for >v<)/
It was good demo. I already like the art. As for the plot it was also good hihi
I'm glad you liked it!